Shit I was really wasted when I paraphrased but thanks man!

well, that means you're even a logical thinker when you're wasted. not all of us manage to be that when wasted.

Prototype for a BM song:




Frost covers the forest floor

Snow gently hits the ground

My sweet winter godess

I keep hope you will deliver

Eyes like sheets of ice

Skin like frost in the morning sun

Lips like bloodstained snow

My queen help me grow

Godess of this winter kingdom

Your worship brings me warmth

Promise of paradise gives hope

Lying on this hill

My body sits still

Blood stains the snow

My weapons scattered in the ice

My godess, My queen

Queen of winter frost

Godess of the forest deep

Your worship brings me hope

I feel this pain

My soul leaves my bieng

Where are you now?

Winter Godess?

Your Warmth Dissapears

My hope turns to tears

In my mind

I was blind

My godess

My queen

Your lies

Took my life

@Chuckie: Hmmm......That was pretty good, but it was a rather depressing ending, which I know is probably your intent. How will this song be structured? I think it might be better if it had a bit more flow to it.

im not really sure about any of those things lol just wrote it in math class :S and its basically a draft so yeah

@Chuck: Well be sure to let us see when it's finished.

@chuckie: really nice dude! i like the ending, very depressive

lololol
Ok guys, I wrote a Comedy Metal song that makes Fun of Death Metal Lyrics. It's meant to be funny, don't take it seriously, but tell me what you think all the same.

Title:
The Steryotypical Death Metal Song

Verse1:
Decapatating a Bus Full of nuns
tear their heads off and shove them up their cunts
Put my dick in the Esophagus that I Start to fuck
leave it nice and slimy lapping up the blood

I tear your eyes out with my knife of hate
In the Empty Brainhole I start to Fornincate
tearing out your intestines I begin to masturbate
Now you have suffered my bloody cums fate

Nailing a Cross in your cranium in your cunt
Now your god begins to Feel the Flow of Shlunt
What now you ask is this shlunt?
It's a cross of Blood and brain matter in your cunt

Chorus: This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.
This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.

Verse2:
Now I am running a bath of Bloody Gore
Drained from your grandmother, the greasy town whore
Swallowing a big slimy gulp of her guts
I'm rubbing the Liver all over my nuts

Sawing off my own arm with one of her teeth
I watch the Blood spurt, it looks like uncooked beef
I eat my own arm, I love the taste of bloody flesh
I force 6 year old children through wirey mesh

Chorus: This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.
This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.

Verse3:
Having sex with a fetus that I ripped from a nun
Nuns don't have sex, so I'm fucking gods son
so if you're a pregnant nun you better start to run
for fucking mesiah fetuses is something I find fun

I tore out the nuns uterous and wore it as a hat
I beat the bloody Corpses with a baseball bat
Shove a bat up a Nuns ass Watch her shit a cat
Rubb the dead nun with Rotten shit and make a Snuff Skat.

-end-

Yeah, I made up the word Shlunt to Rhyme, pretty funny I think. What do you guys think?

Buahahaha That sounds like something that Deathklok would sing! That shlunt thing was pretty br00tal

Written by Sunioj on 07.01.2007 at 15:40

Buahahaha That sounds like something that Deathklok would sing! That shlunt thing was pretty br00tal

I actually got inspiration from The Canibal Corpse song "Sentenced to Burn." Also "Rancid amputation." It's all just so cheesy

Written by Arian Totalis on 07.01.2007 at 19:43

Written by Sunioj on 07.01.2007 at 15:40

Buahahaha That sounds like something that Deathklok would sing! That shlunt thing was pretty br00tal

I actually got inspiration from The Canibal Corpse song "Sentenced to Burn." Also "Rancid amputation." It's all just so cheesy

Lol, you should read the lyrics for eaten by bloodbath or blooddrenched by hypocrisy, tagtren is pretty funny too at writing lyrics!

Written by Sunioj on 10.01.2007 at 15:13

Written by Arian Totalis on 07.01.2007 at 19:43

Written by Sunioj on 07.01.2007 at 15:40

Buahahaha That sounds like something that Deathklok would sing! That shlunt thing was pretty br00tal

I actually got inspiration from The Canibal Corpse song "Sentenced to Burn." Also "Rancid amputation." It's all just so cheesy

Lol, you should read the lyrics for eaten by bloodbath or blooddrenched by hypocrisy, tagtren is pretty funny too at writing lyrics!

Yeah as of late I've been Digging some DM, But Lyrics are so Funny most of the time. I think I prefer proggressive Death Metal Anyway (Such as Death) Because their lyrics are normaly a little more cultivated. But this post really has nothing to do with lyirics I've written or anyone else, so sorry for the off topic folks.

phhaahahahahahahahaha it was pretty funny.. I like Death Metal.. but, I dislike that kind of lyrics... ohh and about "eaten", that's a good song! but yes haha the lyrics are just... cheesy xD (that's just the word for it).

@Arian Totalis, haha, great one, it really captures what (sadly enough) most death metal lyrics are about in a satiric kind of way for that, i personally cant stand that kind of lyrics either

Some kind of gothic rock cheesy lyric what i wrote now
Probobly crap

In The Heat!

We start this heet
We start this fire

Because its
Long long long way home

Out the time
Out of the limit

We lost something
In deserd
Where send are hot
And lizard kissing

Ou Ou Ou
In the heat of the day
In the heat of the night
We dont need no sex
Whyle we run run run beck home

In the heat of the day
In the ehat of the night
Its hard to feel
Real pain of this song

In the heat of the day
In the heat of the night
Somethings locks so strange
Because of or lost lifes
Lives what we lost

In The Heat!

@ K7 it reminds me of some Eurovision songs Kinda cheesy it is..

Here's the lyrics of our bands (Carrion) newest song. I wrote it myself, and I'm aware that there are some things that don't make sence at all but I just found them funny. But the whole point of the song is in the chorus and the last line.

Landmines

Face it! There's no escape
You are part of us and always will
Pay the taxes and live a good life
Have two kids and a whining wife
Don't see the others, do not care
Me and my bro, what a nightmare
Forget, don't forgive everything
This is how it must be
Conclusion, solution, who am I?
No one, nothing, hey but why?
Lies, fears, dry your tears
This ain't natural, but hey so what?
We're all going to die someday
Sooner or later that's the way
I'm a little soldier with a wooden knife
I'm a little soldier with a plastic mind

This is our nation
Our glorious nation
This is our nation
Our proud nation

Facing the circle of eternity
Giving credit to infinity
But am I really the only one
who worries about globalization?
Die! In the summertime!
Don't worry, no one will remember
you anyway
Die! In the summertime!
Die! In the summertime!
I'm a little soldier with a wooden knife
I'm a little soldier with a plastic mind

This is our nation
Our glorious nation
This is our nation
Our proud nation

This my place
No it's not
This is my land
What did you say?

[solo]

This is our nation
Our glorious nation
This is our nation
Our proud nation
[repeat]

Avoid the landmines.

Avoid the landmines. Thanks, I'll remember that.

I like it man, what does your band play?

It seems that we play punk nowadays.. : Okay, maybe punkish hard rock or something like that, so I write alot about anarchy and stuff like that.

This song is about the great depression of the 1930's in my counry, we are learning about it in history class and I suddenly felt I could make a Good song out of it, the name of this one is Black Thursday,Black Tuesday.

Lyrics:
Verse1:Politicians, have mislead their people.
Misery, Now the economis steeple.
Unemployment Rise, Body's fall
President inactive, Injustice for all
Dig in trash, this is your life now
Pocketed cash, politicians go back on their vow.

Chorus:Stock market crashed, it's black thursday
Life has been smashed, it's black tuesday
Pick up the pieces of your life
There is no end to this strife

Verse2:People starve to death in the streets.
Corpse rats, the only ones who eat.
Put the gun up to your face,
in this world you have no place.
There is no law left in this land
Life hangs on a single strand.

-chorus-

Verse3:Hunger, make the body quiver
Starvation, make society shiver
Materialism, now there is no gain
No mariage, all that remains is pain
Forgiveness. some beyond redemption
Bussiness, brings down society with them

Interlude:Break Free! Gather and rise above!
Revolution! It's needed in a world without love!

-Chorus 4x-

-end-

@ Arian Totalis: I liked it. Especially the "Corpse rats, the only ones who eat."

I decided to look some crap from my folder (about 110 lyrics).. This wasn't so bad, so I'll give it a shot.

Serial Killers

Blood floas from the darkness to warn the guardians
Rotten bodies signifie the madness
Some pathetic existences have faced their ends
And traumatic panic is on

So take this bite
Daily
Are you able to survive
From the serial killers

My bride isn't enough to satisfie my will
I need more
We doomed blackhearted pricks are sinking this night
To something that is called anynomous fear
Named by the only ones
Who consider themselves as pure appearances
And something traumatic.. panic

So take this bite
Daily
You aren't able to survive
Your tired irrational life
One scream, one death
Suddenly
Thanks to the passion fillers
Here be the serial killers

[solo or something]

So take this bite
Daily
Are you able to survive
So take this bite
Daily
You aren't able to survive
Your tired irrational life
One scream, one death
Suddenly
Thanks to the passion fillers
Here be the serial killers
Here be the serial killers
Serial killers

Written by Guest on 02.03.2007 at 23:04

@ Arian Totalis: I liked it. Especially the "Corpse rats, the only ones who eat."

I decided to look some crap from my folder (about 110 lyrics).. This wasn't so bad, so I'll give it a shot.

Serial Killers

Blood floas from the darkness to warn the guardians
Rotten bodies signifie the madness
Some pathetic existences have faced their ends
And traumatic panic is on

So take this bite
Daily
Are you able to survive
From the serial killers

My bride isn't enough to satisfie my will
I need more
We doomed blackhearted pricks are sinking this night
To something that is called anynomous fear
Named by the only ones
Who consider themselves as pure appearances
And something traumatic.. panic

So take this bite
Daily
You aren't able to survive
Your tired irrational life
One scream, one death
Suddenly
Thanks to the passion fillers
Here be the serial killers

[solo or something]

So take this bite
Daily
Are you able to survive
So take this bite
Daily
You aren't able to survive
Your tired irrational life
One scream, one death
Suddenly
Thanks to the passion fillers
Here be the serial killers
Here be the serial killers
Serial killers

That was pretty good, I especially like the opening part about how The blood comes to warn the "Guardians" Which I assume signify's police officers.

Written by Guest on 21.02.2007 at 23:54

@ K7 it reminds me of some Eurovision songs Kinda cheesy it is..

You know death/gothic rock are for emeotions and then Systers of Mercy lyrics are cheesy too?

@carrion: the chorus kind of reminds me of the "demolition" album by Priest(and that means it's kinda cheesy, but it delivers) and all in all a nice lyric but the 2nd verse needs work. for it to have a nice vibe and a rhythm, you could try making all the verses to be approximately the same number of syllables. but hey, if it's a death metal thing, you don't really need rhythm.

Written by Arian Totalis on 07.01.2007 at 02:02

lololol
Ok guys, I wrote a Comedy Metal song that makes Fun of Death Metal Lyrics. It's meant to be funny, don't take it seriously, but tell me what you think all the same.

Title:
The Steryotypical Death Metal Song

Verse1:
Decapatating a Bus Full of nuns
tear their heads off and shove them up their cunts
Put my dick in the Esophagus that I Start to fuck
leave it nice and slimy lapping up the blood

I tear your eyes out with my knife of hate
In the Empty Brainhole I start to Fornincate
tearing out your intestines I begin to masturbate
Now you have suffered my bloody cums fate

Nailing a Cross in your cranium in your cunt
Now your god begins to Feel the Flow of Shlunt
What now you ask is this shlunt?
It's a cross of Blood and brain matter in your cunt

Chorus: This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.
This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.

Verse2:
Now I am running a bath of Bloody Gore
Drained from your grandmother, the greasy town whore
Swallowing a big slimy gulp of her guts
I'm rubbing the Liver all over my nuts

Sawing off my own arm with one of her teeth
I watch the Blood spurt, it looks like uncooked beef
I eat my own arm, I love the taste of bloody flesh
I force 6 year old children through wirey mesh

Chorus: This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.
This is the Steryptipical Death metal song,
This is for everything which is lyricly wrong.

Verse3:
Having sex with a fetus that I ripped from a nun
Nuns don't have sex, so I'm fucking gods son
so if you're a pregnant nun you better start to run
for fucking mesiah fetuses is something I find fun

I tore out the nuns uterous and wore it as a hat
I beat the bloody Corpses with a baseball bat
Shove a bat up a Nuns ass Watch her shit a cat
Rubb the dead nun with Rotten shit and make a Snuff Skat.

-end-

Yeah, I made up the word Shlunt to Rhyme, pretty funny I think. What do you guys think?

WHAHAHAHAHAH I almost fell of my chair laughing at it. Best lyrics ever. HAHAHAHAH Are you already a professional DM lyric writer

Written by Guest on 05.03.2007 at 18:37

Written by Arian Totalis on 07.01.2007 at 02:02

Death Metal song

WHAHAHAHAHAH I almost fell of my chair laughing at it. Best lyrics ever. HAHAHAHAH Are you already a professional DM lyric writer

Yeah that was the Idea, to Satire Stereotypical Death Metal

@ Arian Totalis: Yeah the guardians = the police, or a whatever controlling authority.

@ K7: Well maybe they are.. By thinking a certain way, everything can sound cheesy to your ear.

@ Cursed: It's been long time since I wrote that but I remember that the verse 2 was definetly meant to go that way. It ain't easy to get the rhytm by just looking the lyrics.

i would post somthing but i totaly suck anus at writing lyrics... ive tryed but i just cant do it.... lol ... i might be able to somday

Written by Guest on 01.06.2007 at 19:30

i would post somthing but i totaly suck anus at writing lyrics... ive tryed but i just cant do it.... lol ... i might be able to somday

haha! well, I sucked at writing lyrics just a year ago, but with more practice and so on I feel I'm getting better my band mates (at least the music writer of the band) just loved my last lyric (Silent Requiem) just keep at it Hatebreeder_509

oh i will... i wont let WHITEY KEEP ME DOWN!... jk ... or my crappy writing keep me down

This is a death/thrash song I wrote:
Keep in mind: THIS SONG IS PLAYED EXTREMELY FAST.


Title: "Pussies Can't Inherit the Throne"

(unbelievably fast riff, blast beats, no bass)

Severing the heads of the chosen,
Taking there place on throne.
I take them out, tearing, eating all their flesh,
I wanna hear them scream and hear them moan.
Killing them before they even see me,
I give them no time to defend.
They are dead and fucking bleeding, all over the ground,
Dark Angel of god FUCKIN' DESCEND!!!!

(crazy solo, into breakdown, half time, same riff but much slower and with different time signature; symbols play a prominant role here.)

Slow death, fuck that, I kill 'em real fast
The bitches die before they hit the ground
You can't waste time with fuckin pussies in power,
"click bam ouch slam" will be the sound.
Or I'll cut the bitches up, nice and neat
and put their fuckin' remains in brunswick stew
then feed it to another gay RICH motherfucker,
Before I burn his ass into glue.

(Back to original riff & time signature--remember, this is fucking FAST you can barely understand it.)

Slit their guts, chop there fingers make em scream
Then take your place where you remain supreme
Give em hell and fuck em up real good,
No pussies comin' near my neighborhood

Don't feel, don't smell, don't fuck-in-hear,
Just see the bitches die half-way,
Between their stance and the ground, what the fuck is that sound?
it's a bitch that I just had ta' fuckin slay.
It's time for me to fuckin put an end to this shit,
these pussies takin' over the throne,
I'll blow the bitches brains out with a 12 guage shotgun,
24 meters, the distance his brains will have flown!
I'm gonna get away from this land of mi-se-ray,
where pussies roam freely ever more
I wanna move to Hell, where the fuckin' demons dwell
Then I can forever live in gore.........(random screams)

(Riff fades out with more soloing, and end)