Written by =maD.Doc:. on 26.04.2008 at 00:18

Written by Lord TJ on 25.04.2008 at 21:35

Written by =maD.Doc:. on 24.04.2008 at 17:55

Written by ZombieDeath on 23.04.2008 at 20:29

if i need each one, i can take it ??

If you mean if you can take our lyrics, I don't think so. You need to ask the author of the lyrics if that's the case. If you just take them it's like stealing, and we don't want that!

Which is why I don't post my lyrics here for that possibility.
Anyone could just copy and paste and save. Nobody else would know except for the theif to claim it as his own.

Haha, yeah, actually I just realized that you probably shouldn't rely too much on this forum to post your lyrics xD Therefor I removed all my lyrics I've posted here ^^

Too late! I already took them all

Written by Lord TJ on 25.04.2008 at 21:35

Written by =maD.Doc:. on 24.04.2008 at 17:55

Written by ZombieDeath on 23.04.2008 at 20:29

if i need each one, i can take it ??

If you mean if you can take our lyrics, I don't think so. You need to ask the author of the lyrics if that's the case. If you just take them it's like stealing, and we don't want that!

Which is why I don't post my lyrics here for that possibility.
Anyone could just copy and paste and save. Nobody else would know except for the theif to claim it as his own.

well, if the lyrics are crappy(like in my case) then i'm not really concerned

Written by Smurfophagist on 27.04.2008 at 22:02

Written by =maD.Doc:. on 26.04.2008 at 00:18

Written by Lord TJ on 25.04.2008 at 21:35

Written by =maD.Doc:. on 24.04.2008 at 17:55

Written by ZombieDeath on 23.04.2008 at 20:29

if i need each one, i can take it ??

If you mean if you can take our lyrics, I don't think so. You need to ask the author of the lyrics if that's the case. If you just take them it's like stealing, and we don't want that!

Which is why I don't post my lyrics here for that possibility.
Anyone could just copy and paste and save. Nobody else would know except for the theif to claim it as his own.

Haha, yeah, actually I just realized that you probably shouldn't rely too much on this forum to post your lyrics xD Therefor I removed all my lyrics I've posted here ^^

Too late! I already took them all

Haha, yeah really!? xD Too bad for you as we're gonna sue you then We have the copyright

Just something i made 10 minutes ago, thought i might share it with you people

I want to run from all this
I didn't bring it on myself
No-one's to blame,
Though perhaps it's easier this way

Divided not by hate in my mind
But a need to escape, I can't really explain
I want to run away on angel wings
Or make these sounds all stop

Neon light and computer screen
Do little to consolate me
So i bleed ink on paper
And these words become little pieces of me

Written by Valentin B on 12.01.2009 at 22:23

Just something i made 10 minutes ago, thought i might share it with you people

I want to run from all this
I didn't bring it on myself
No-one's to blame,
Though perhaps it's easier this way

Divided not by hate in my mind
But a need to escape, I can't really explain
I want to run away on angel wings
Or make these sounds all stop

Neon light and computer screen
Do little to consolate me
So i bleed ink on paper
And these words become little pieces of me

Good lyrics. But a little tip. When you write "I want to run from all this" write without "I" in the begining of such things. It gives more effect. I wrote like that some time ago myself, but this tip helped me a lot to mature my songwriting.

However "I" is a great vowel to start vocal-lines with.

Here is a lyric I wrote about 2 months ago, the latest song I´ve finished.
It´s a metalcore song, I guess. The first verse is an acoustic intro illustrating a dream.

-- Falling, flying -- (copyright Aji 2008)

I see her, she is standing on the ledge
Her foot touches the air
I scream her name but she cannot hear me through this wicked wind
She takes the step and fear takes my soul

She is falling, she is flying, away

I have gazed through her
darkened eyes
To long I´ve seen these
long days of dying
Still cannot stop her fading
The gray wave that drowns her

Falling, flying, away/Falling, flying, free

She has left this world now
Of her sorrow, no regrets
Smiling she is walking towards the dead
A silhouette in the light
Waving a last goodbye
Leaving this world a much darker place

Her bed a silent prison
Her body´s lying still
Her eyes a ghostly shadow
Of her undying will

As we come to see her
Her courage in the face of the death
Makes us so much stronger
While it takes our faith

She has left this world now
Of her sorrow, no regrets
Smiling she is walking towards the dead
A silhouette in the light
Waving a last goodbye
Leaving this world a much darker place

Don´t take her
She is holding on
It´s too soon
All is not lost

A lost prayer
A fulfilled life
A grieving crowd
An empty sky

This is a parody of a song by a primarily acoustic band of the name Neutral Milk Hotel. this band is a favorite of a few of my good friends and the song "Aeroplane Over The Sea" is one of their favorites, so while i was bored as fuck at work, i decided to write a parody of the song, replacing the original lyrics with my own. read the original lyrics here http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/In-the-Aeroplane-Over-the-Sea-lyrics-Neutral-Milk-Hotel/BB5DC9FB5E9C824948256E5B0024BDF6 before reading my version. i think Valentin is the only one here who has seen it thus far, so enjoy. btw, this version i titled "From the Pile That Sits at My Feet"

What a beautiful stake
I have plunged through your face
Bitch don't make me go get my gun
This, dear, its not a dream, as i rupture your spleen
In a blink of an eye you'll be gone from me
Fucking shit
I think i have had far too much to drink

Yeah today you will die
And your ashes will fly from the pile that sits at my feet
But for now i am drunk
Oh so very drunk
On this porcelain bowl you'll see me resting
Fucking shit
In the eyes of law, i am floating up shit's creek

What a pityful life
I have took here tonight
There is screaming that sounds in the street
With the blood all abound
And the bones all around
Hear her screams as shes clawing and grabbing at me
Fucking shit
How the shrieks of pain reach above the trees

Now i dont remember you
Why are your fingers in my mouth
I really dont think thats right
Or relevant in any way
And where you are, i do not know
All secrets sleep six feet below
With hella people you do not know
No you don't even know his name

What a beautiful space
I have found in this place
Prison has become my new home
If we meet on a cloud
I'll be laugrhing at loud
I'll be laughing at all you bitches you'll see
Can't believe how strange it is to be standing here at all
-END-

i wrote a parody to "Wild Horses" by the Stones and i'll put it up here if anyones interested...

edit: i changed a few words after pondering it in my sleep last night.

Written by Valentin B on 12.01.2009 at 22:23

Just something i made 10 minutes ago, thought i might share it with you people

I want to run from all this
I didn't bring it on myself
No-one's to blame,
Though perhaps it's easier this way

Divided not by hate in my mind
But a need to escape, I can't really explain
I want to run away on angel wings
Or make these sounds all stop

Neon light and computer screen
Do little to consolate me
So i bleed ink on paper
And these words become little pieces of me

those are some song lyrics, or they are some of the lyrics written by you...coz i have never heard of this song before!

Lol here comes the MINESWEEPER DEATH METAL SONG

yeah you bastard
motherfucking turd
i know you run and you can't hide
engage minesweeper genocide

9 only mines all round
mistake you make, you're failure bound
say goodbye to your leg asshole
cause you just clicked on

MY
MINE
NOT YOURS
MINE

lethal explosion sets limbs flying awry
eyes turn to "x"-es but you needn't worry
your pain is endless my sadism is limitless
be careful motherfucker nearby might just be

MY
MINE
NOT YOURS
MINE
QUIT
WHINE
LIMBS
THINE
SEPARATED
GONE
FLYING
IN
ALL
DIRECTIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNSSSSS

This should be some black metal lyrics:
I've got the concept but its need some brush
What do you think

All tears are frosted
All blood has spilled away
All bodies root the same

All prays are spoken
All hope is frogoten
All lives fade the same

While you pass the gates of dark
And enter the ethernal fire
Remember yours existence
That I gave you,
the purpose and design

Leave all hope you mortal man
God cant hear your pray
Forgot the wicked lies
Weapons,and assistance of friends

Everything got to die

All tears are frosted
All blood has spilled away
All bodies root the same

BREATH FLOWING THROUGH YOUR OPEN HOLE
FINNED MOCKERY HAS NO SOUL
I
WILL MAKE IT MY LIFE'S PURPOSE
ANNIHILATE YOU ONCE AND FOR
ALL



GREAT NETS OF STEEL
I HUNT THE OPEN WATERS
UNSIGHTLY
MOTHER
WITH HER YOUNG CLOSE BY



CAPTURED
PULLED ON BOARD
SOFT
SMOTH SKIN RISING
WITH EVERY BREATH
MY COCK BEGINS TO STIFFEN
I FORCE MY
MEMBER
I FORCE MY MEMBER IN
AS I CUM
ITS LIFE
EXTINGUISHED

SUFFOCATE!!



OUR DISTAIN
FOR YOUR FOUL
KIND
KNOWS NO END
RAPING YOU
UNTIL YOUR EXTINCTION
FILTY CURS OF THE
SEA
RAPE AWAY MY
MISERY!!



DIE BOTTLE NOSE DOLPHIN
DIE
FILTHY CUR OF THE SEA



SUFFOCATE!!



I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I
KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
DIE!!!!!

Written by GULCH OF ROT on 24.04.2009 at 03:16

BREATH FLOWING THROUGH YOUR OPEN HOLE
FINNED MOCKERY HAS NO SOUL
I
WILL MAKE IT MY LIFE'S PURPOSE
ANNIHILATE YOU ONCE AND FOR
ALL



GREAT NETS OF STEEL
I HUNT THE OPEN WATERS
UNSIGHTLY
MOTHER
WITH HER YOUNG CLOSE BY



CAPTURED
PULLED ON BOARD
SOFT
SMOTH SKIN RISING
WITH EVERY BREATH
MY COCK BEGINS TO STIFFEN
I FORCE MY
MEMBER
I FORCE MY MEMBER IN
AS I CUM
ITS LIFE
EXTINGUISHED

SUFFOCATE!!



OUR DISTAIN
FOR YOUR FOUL
KIND
KNOWS NO END
RAPING YOU
UNTIL YOUR EXTINCTION
FILTY CURS OF THE
SEA
RAPE AWAY MY
MISERY!!



DIE BOTTLE NOSE DOLPHIN
DIE
FILTHY CUR OF THE SEA



SUFFOCATE!!



I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I
KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
DIE!!!!!

in it's own way, i think it's ok, but only up until you talk about the dolphin. that last part is useless, imo. it felt as if the whole thng was a joke... just a thought

Written by tulkas on 24.04.2009 at 03:38

Written by GULCH OF ROT on 24.04.2009 at 03:16

BREATH FLOWING THROUGH YOUR OPEN HOLE
FINNED MOCKERY HAS NO SOUL
I
WILL MAKE IT MY LIFE'S PURPOSE
ANNIHILATE YOU ONCE AND FOR
ALL



GREAT NETS OF STEEL
I HUNT THE OPEN WATERS
UNSIGHTLY
MOTHER
WITH HER YOUNG CLOSE BY



CAPTURED
PULLED ON BOARD
SOFT
SMOTH SKIN RISING
WITH EVERY BREATH
MY COCK BEGINS TO STIFFEN
I FORCE MY
MEMBER
I FORCE MY MEMBER IN
AS I CUM
ITS LIFE
EXTINGUISHED

SUFFOCATE!!



OUR DISTAIN
FOR YOUR FOUL
KIND
KNOWS NO END
RAPING YOU
UNTIL YOUR EXTINCTION
FILTY CURS OF THE
SEA
RAPE AWAY MY
MISERY!!



DIE BOTTLE NOSE DOLPHIN
DIE
FILTHY CUR OF THE SEA



SUFFOCATE!!



I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I
KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
I KILLED THE BOTTLE NOSE
DIE!!!!!

in it's own way, i think it's ok, but only up until you talk about the dolphin. that last part is useless, imo. it felt as if the whole thng was a joke... just a thought

IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE FUNNY.
DID YOU LISTEN TO THE SONG?

Written by GULCH OF ROT on 24.04.2009 at 03:42

IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE FUNNY.
DID YOU LISTEN TO THE SONG?

Oh, i had my suspicion, like i said, but i didn't know for certain, hehe. and no, i haven't listened to it

I AM WORKING ON A SONG NOW CALLED "HULK VS GULCH" IT'S GOING TO HAVE A HULK SMASH BREAKDOWN

Written by GULCH OF ROT on 24.04.2009 at 03:52

I AM WORKING ON A SONG NOW CALLED "HULK VS GULCH" IT'S GOING TO HAVE A HULK SMASH BREAKDOWN

Why do you use only caps lock? Just wondering O_o

Written by =maD.Doc:. on 25.04.2009 at 01:04

Written by GULCH OF ROT on 24.04.2009 at 03:52

I AM WORKING ON A SONG NOW CALLED "HULK VS GULCH" IT'S GOING TO HAVE A HULK SMASH BREAKDOWN

Why do you use only caps lock? Just wondering O_o

I am a drafts man in a land surveying firm all the maps i create are writen in all caps so i am just used to having caps lock on its habit sorry for any inconvenience

When me and my girlfriend started going out I did a song for her. "Love song... with metal" would be good description.
Anyway, here goes My Light In Dark:

(Intro)
Once I thought that my light was gone,
but that light was false.
Once I thought that my blood was gone,
but then I found my heart: you.

(Verse 1)
You pumped blood in to my dry veins.
Your glance is like a second of paradise.
You are the key to the locked door.
Your touch is like a ecstasy for me.

(Chorus)
You´re like a drop of water
for the desert
You´re like a drop of blood
for the dying.
You´re my light in dark.

(Verse 2)
You pulled me from the ashes.
Your skin soft as velvet on silk.
You are moon in my nights.
Your lips have showed me the paradise.

(Chorus)
You´re like a drop of water
for the desert
You´re like a drop of blood
for the dying.
You´re my light in dark.

(Interlude)
Nothing will ever take you, from me.
Nothing will ever take me, from you.
Nothing will ever come between us.
Nothing will ever tear this down!

(Chorus)
You´re like a drop of water
for the desert
You´re like a drop of blood
for the dying.
You´re my light in dark.

Well I have a lot of lyrics that I've written and I dont know what to show you guys, but I'll just add something.
In Estonia there are few bands that use some of my stuff, one of them is Tramontana, they make symphonic gothic metal and are actually really good, tho.
Okay. Here is one called "Lullaby of Dreams".

Lullaby of Dreams

She's the seraph of the eternal flame,
living close to the skies,
in a tower of thousands of mirrors
and there are all of the angels
melting into frost.

From lowering clouds everything awakes
into the eternal winters.
In and above all of men,
she will wait for you in her dreams.

ref:
You, a sweet lullaby of her dreams,
she opens the window into the night.
For you she's ever sleeping
and she can't see how the time
turns into dust and fades.

But when you don't come
through the eye of whispering wolves,
she cries the tears into her last goodbye,
from where you won't find no escape.

ref:
You, a sweet lullaby of dreams.
Her prayers were for nothing.
For you she's ever sleeping
and she's blind to see how the time
turns into dust and fades.

MHK.
Inspiration by Tristania.
02.08.2008

I really liked this one, though i thought you could make some changes. i'll put them beside the original, or cross it out. it's just a suggestion, hope you like it
btw, are you 2 still together?

Written by Peuranpuolikas on 01.05.2009 at 10:05

When me and my girlfriend started going out I did a song for her. "Love song... with metal" would be good description.
Anyway, here goes My Light In Dark:

(Intro)
Once I thought that my light was gone,
but that light was false.
Once I thought that my blood was gone,
but then I found my heart: you.

(Verse 1)
You pumped blood in to my dry veins.
Your glance is like a moment in paradise.
You are the key to the locked door.
Your touch is like a ecstasy for me my ecstasy.

(Chorus)
You´re like a drop of water
for the desert
You´re like a drop of blood
for the dying.
You´re my light in dark. (here i though it could be either in the dark or in darkness )

(Verse 2)
You pulled me from the ashes.
Your skin soft as velvet on silk.
You are the moon in/of my nights.
Your lips have showed me the paradise my paradise

(Interlude)
Nothing will ever take you from me. (erased the comma after you )
Nothing will ever take me from you. (erased the comma after me )
Nothing will ever come between us.
Nothing will ever tear/take this us down!

Written by tulkas on 11.06.2009 at 09:55

I really liked this one, though i thought you could make some changes. i'll put them beside the original, or cross it out. it's just a suggestion, hope you like it
btw, are you 2 still together?

Written by Peuranpuolikas on 01.05.2009 at 10:05

When me and my girlfriend started going out I did a song for her. "Love song... with metal" would be good description.
Anyway, here goes My Light In Dark:

(Intro)
Once I thought that my light was gone,
but that light was false.
Once I thought that my blood was gone,
but then I found my heart: you.

(Verse 1)
You pumped blood in to my dry veins.
Your glance is like a moment in paradise.
You are the key to the locked door.
Your touch is like a ecstasy for me my ecstasy.

(Chorus)
You´re like a drop of water
for the desert
You´re like a drop of blood
for the dying.
You´re my light in dark. (here i though it could be either in the dark or in darkness )

(Verse 2)
You pulled me from the ashes.
Your skin soft as velvet on silk.
You are the moon in/of my nights.
Your lips have showed me the paradise my paradise

(Interlude)
Nothing will ever take you from me. (erased the comma after you )
Nothing will ever take me from you. (erased the comma after me )
Nothing will ever come between us.
Nothing will ever tear/take this us down!

Thanks m8! This helped alot!
And yes we are together... isn´t that right, Rosaka?

Written by Peuranpuolikas on 11.06.2009 at 13:12

Thanks m8! This helped alot!
And yes we are together... isn´t that right, Rosaka?

cool, glad to help! and congrats with your gf

Here's my lyrics for my band Mistform, as an example.
Song is called Bleeding


I haven't loved before
This is the most wonderful thing from all
But you treated me like I was air
I'm meaningless liek my asshairs

Despair has taken over
This loveless path of mine
Hatred grows much stronger
As my love ever did

"You are gone
Dreams are dead
Hatred arises it's head
Faith is gone
Hope is dead
Love still bleeds from my veins"

It seems like I am nothing
But I don't care anymore
As I stare at my mirror reflection
Can't feel a thing, not even bittersweet

"You are gone..."

I see a light ahead
My rusty old switchblade
I'm gonna end my anxiety
Will set my blood flow free

"You are gone..."

---copyright Eerik Latvala---

Written by Guest on 23.06.2009 at 08:35

Here's my lyrics for my band Mistform, as an example.
Song is called Bleeding


I haven't loved before
This is the most wonderful thing from all
But you treated me like I was air
I'm meaningless liek my asshairs

Despair has taken over
This loveless path of mine
Hatred grows much stronger
As my love ever did

"You are gone
Dreams are dead
Hatred arises it's head
Faith is gone
Hope is dead
Love still bleeds from my veins"

It seems like I am nothing
But I don't care anymore
As I stare at my mirror reflection
Can't feel a thing, not even bittersweet

"You are gone..."

I see a light ahead
My rusty old switchblade
I'm gonna end my anxiety
Will set my blood flow free

"You are gone..."

---copyright Eerik Latvala---

Hey, I like it a lot, man! I really do, 'cause I feel identified with it Your band, what metal is it? Just to get an idea of what music is expressing that.

Lol "i'm meaningless like my asshairs" i love lyrics with a really misanthropic and bitter sense of humor

Heh, thanks for supporting my lyrical output

@tulkas: it's kinda sentenceddish song, you can listen it from here http://www.myspace.com/mistform , but beware, those versions which are there, sucks ass

Empathize with chaos; it wouldn't be the last time
You killed the very essence of integrity, burning your bridges.
Stabilising innocence; falling into shame
You couldn't love me, and you know it, so don't even try

As burdened as a stone with no name,
Knowing not past, only shame and pain
When every shadow cast brings back your name
I know that I'm in trouble

When love turns to regret, turns to hate
When your innocence is intertwined with fate
When nothing you say can heal my shame
I stopped listening

As purposeful as you in the end
I really wish I never knew you, wish you weren't my friend
That way I could blank you out

Maybe one day you'll love again
Until that day, just hate, you don't have friends
Just targets to express your pain, regret
And utterly destroy, so they know how you feel

When love turns to regret, turns to hate
When your innocence is intertwined with fate
When nothing you say can heal my shame
I stopped listening, I stopped caring

I stopped loving you long ago
I say
But I know it's not true
I can feel you in my arms, I can feel you in my heart
I still scream out your name
I still can feel your pain
I feel you, I love you, I NEED YOU!

I'm so sorry
I'm so sorry
I'm so sorry
I'm not there
I'm so sorry
Please don't worry
Your still here
And I still care

When love turns to regret, turns to hate
When your innocence is intertwined with fate

I've not wrote anything in a while. But yeah. have alook at this

(copywrite AngelOfMercy and Burning Midnight2009)



I see all your demons raising hell.
What's wrong with this land time will tell
Your whole world is corrupt.
The steel will meet

The fear you have felt has turned to hate
You're destiny will outrun your fate.
You are in chaos
Look at the sky

Chorus x2

Over the blood red sky
come over this land to be our guide


Come forward march see what terror's we face
Turn it into the hell we have made
March into the mouth with courage
The power you have made will flourish


(speaking part)

For years I have been sent to countless war zones time will not seek me out
My vengence will be quick and swift. For your might has failed
Bow down to your gods for we know they are non existant.
Now Perish.

I've not wrote anything in a while. But yeah. have alook at this

(copywrite AngelOfMercy and Burning Midnight2009)



I see all your demons raising hell.
What's wrong with this land time will tell
Your whole world is corrupt.
The steel will meet

The fear you have felt has turned to hate
You're destiny will outrun your fate.
You are in chaos
Look at the sky

Chorus x2

Over the blood red sky
come over this land to be our guide

I didn't mean to post them twice. Sorry.

I recently started to write some lyrics, some are humoristic and some are serious, this one is mostly for fun and hawt lovin'

---------------------

THE PROSTITUTE (Copyright GamlaSonn 2009, plx dun't st3al diz)

She's the only one who truly listens
She's the only one who truly cares
She doesn't judge me, as society do
With her I'm conscious free

She treats me well
Gives me all that I seek
Gives me all that I need
She's the highlight of my life

Whenever I'm glad, she's there
Whenever I'm sad, she's there
Whenever I'm lonely, she's there
Whenever I'm angry, she's there

She knows a mans need
Satisfy you in ways you don't know
Her gentle strokes on your back
Sit back and relax

Come here darling, do as I command
Tonight you are mine, so be bad
I hold her leg up while trusting her hard
She let out screams of ecstasy

Her pussy is wet and easy to penetrate
Our bodies in union over and over
The sweat is thick as honey
The sheets are flying high

She's on her back while touching herself
I touch her skin, like moisty silk
She bites her lips while I'm ramming her
Tears of joy in our eyes

Nearing climax, the best in my life
She can hardly control herself
She helps me finnish
She swallows my manjuice

[instrumental, solo's etc]

[acapella]
Life is being rough to me
Nothing seems to go my way
I'm alone, I'm a freak
Everyone hates me

[instrumental gradually increases volume]

[repeat this part]
Whenever I'm glad, she's there
Whenever I'm sad, she's there
Whenever I'm lonely, she's there
Whenever I'm angry, she's there
[second higher pitch voice layer]
She treats me well
Gives me all that I seek
Gives me all that I need
She's the highlight of my life