Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

Written by Guest on 28.06.2011 at 00:26

Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

Quorthon from Bathory? Quality is... Quality was ... !

First of all, rhythm and playing on stable tempo is an important matter, if you're alone and there is nobody to play the drums;
it's better to do it with a metronome or sample drums
(you can listen to the metronome with a headphone and play the guitar if you don't want to record the metronome or samples)

Besides, you're doing almost good on composing, I like the melodies; especially that eastern one!
And the riffs are on their way to improve, sometimes they are a bit repetitious to listen to;
but my overall rating will be "Good", of course it needs other instruments; but you're lucky!
I'll imagine other instruments and even vocals if they are not there.

(What did you say at 09:22 to 09:51 ? )

Written by SSM on 29.06.2011 at 13:08

Written by Guest on 28.06.2011 at 00:26

Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

Quorthon from Bathory? Quality is... Quality was ... !

First of all, rhythm and playing on stable tempo is an important matter, if you're alone and there is nobody to play the drums;
it's better to do it with a metronome or sample drums
(you can listen to the metronome with a headphone and play the guitar if you don't want to record the metronome or samples)

Besides, you're doing almost good on composing, I like the melodies; especially that eastern one!
And the riffs are on their way to improve, sometimes they are a bit repetitious to listen to;
but my overall rating will be "Good", of course it needs other instruments; but you're lucky!
I'll imagine other instruments and even vocals if they are not there.

(What did you say at 09:22 to 09:51 ? )

I was telling my cousin to turn the guitar to clean.

Written by Guest on 28.06.2011 at 00:26

Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

What is it's name!
if i wanna be honest i'll rate it 7. ( just becuase the lack of other instruments)
otherwise it would be great! (of course just for death genre not anything else)
keep on this. i'll download all your works .

Damn dial-up sounds like you did pretty good, its a shame i cant watch it

It was pretty good on the whole. Some riffs did seem a bit generic, but you showed a good ability to merge different riffs together- Which is an extremely important part of songwriting. The middle eastern interlude was a cool touch, although it might be worth learning some more scales to add a bit of diversity to your leads. Try learning the Hirajoshi scale, i think its a mode of the minor pentatonic. In fact I know that the pentatonic scales are somewhat overused it metal leads, but its worth familiarising yourself with it, because merging it with other modes such as the hirajoshi, can add to your music. The song did seem slightly instinctive, if you know what I mean, but i'm sure as you keep playing, you'll improve on that aspect. Maybe its worth developing technical ability a bit more, I used a book called Troy Stetina's Speed licks ( something like that title), and just played little exercises with my metronome, it helped massively, or you can just find free exercises all over the internet too. I've only been playing 3 years, I'm not an expert, so don't get too offended by my criticisms

Written by Guest on 04.07.2011 at 15:52

It was pretty good on the whole. Some riffs did seem a bit generic, but you showed a good ability to merge different riffs together- Which is an extremely important part of songwriting. The middle eastern interlude was a cool touch, although it might be worth learning some more scales to add a bit of diversity to your leads. Try learning the Hirajoshi scale, i think its a mode of the minor pentatonic. In fact I know that the pentatonic scales are somewhat overused it metal leads, but its worth familiarising yourself with it, because merging it with other modes such as the hirajoshi, can add to your music. The song did seem slightly instinctive, if you know what I mean, but i'm sure as you keep playing, you'll improve on that aspect. Maybe its worth developing technical ability a bit more, I used a book called Troy Stetina's Speed licks ( something like that title), and just played little exercises with my metronome, it helped massively, or you can just find free exercises all over the internet too. I've only been playing 3 years, I'm not an expert, so don't get too offended by my criticisms

I've been playing for 1 year when I played it. Yesterday, I did a short black metal instrumental. Here you go:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/lEpA6rQu/20110703_184323.html

Written by Guest on 04.07.2011 at 15:52

Yesterday, I did a short black metal instrumental. Here you go:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/lEpA6rQu/20110703_184323.html

Dude that's pretty awesome but I think If you want to play a Black Metal instrumental you should be faster.

Written by Metal_4Ever on 05.07.2011 at 03:30

Written by Guest on 04.07.2011 at 15:52

Yesterday, I did a short black metal instrumental. Here you go:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/lEpA6rQu/20110703_184323.html

Dude that's pretty awesome but I think If you want to play a Black Metal instrumental you should be faster.

I'm currently doing it on Guitar Pro with drums. It'll be finished tomorrow.

Written by Saeed_p on 03.07.2011 at 21:27

Written by Guest on 28.06.2011 at 00:26

Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

What is it's name!
if i wanna be honest i'll rate it 7. ( just becuase the lack of other instruments)
otherwise it would be great! (of course just for death genre not anything else)
keep on this. i'll download all your works .

A black metal instrumental is coming up tomorrow. It's with drums. Hope u like it.:P

Written by Guest on 05.07.2011 at 16:15

Written by Saeed_p on 03.07.2011 at 21:27

Written by Guest on 28.06.2011 at 00:26

Http://www.4shared.com/audio/l4zpzJrS/20110627_224045.html
My first Death Metal song. Full of mistakes, but it'll do. The quality's rough, but hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

What is it's name!
if i wanna be honest i'll rate it 7. ( just becuase the lack of other instruments)
otherwise it would be great! (of course just for death genre not anything else)
keep on this. i'll download all your works .

A black metal instrumental is coming up tomorrow. It's with drums. Hope u like it.:P

ok release it soon.