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Posted by Oaken on 02.06.2012 at 17:17
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https://dl.dropbox.com/u/80080964/Blizzards.mp3
I tried doing a full black metal song with guitars and drums. The production is miles ahead from before, but I think I still can progress.
And you can listen instantly without downloading.
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 theFIST
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07.09.2012 at 14:23
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Written by Oaken on 08.07.2012 at 21:03
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The three songs demo is complete. Professional feedback (As If You were reviewing something for MS) would be gladly appreciated.
i could really enjoy the second song, it"s equally great as the first, if it were mixed differently, but think it"s terrible to have the snare drum so high in the mix
don"t really like the third
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07.09.2012 at 15:10
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Written by BoxCar Willy on 07.09.2012 at 04:35
have fun, take your time. It's hard to write 30+ minutes of material.
It's hard write 30+ minutes of GOOD material you mean 
Written by theFIST on 07.09.2012 at 14:23
i could really enjoy the second song, it"s equally great as the first, if it were mixed differently, but think it"s terrible to have the snare drum so high in the mix
don"t really like the third
Thanks for the feedback.
Written by Ellrohir on 07.09.2012 at 13:40
The intro for "Blizzards" i found really awful and unbearable, but after 1st minute it is great stuff, man
just i think you are missing the vocals, because your music is quite too aggressive for being instrumental only as some atmo-black projects...
I assure you, the intro was very badly played. I don't know, but that guitar tone made sound horrendous, and it's funnily dissonant in the first place. I might add vocals if I do more work, but I'm not sure yet.
Thanks for the feedback 
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07.09.2012 at 17:31
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Written by Oaken on 07.09.2012 at 15:10
It's hard write 30+ minutes of GOOD material you mean
Written by Ellrohir on 07.09.2012 at 13:40
The intro for "Blizzards" i found really awful and unbearable, but after 1st minute it is great stuff, man
just i think you are missing the vocals
I assure you, the intro was very badly played
I might add vocals if I do more work, but I'm not sure yet.
Thanks for the feedback
well, after such convincing 2 songs it should be material of equal quality to those, continuing that way and experimenting as soon as you feel comfortable to could make you one of the major black metal artists and influences of the 20s
by the way, am still offering you the growl vocals 
also, in case you want that, i could do alternate mixes for the songs, maybe with some noise elements in the intro of the first song
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