Hello everyone,
This is a 2 songs demo, I've recorded creating a project naming it "Detoxicated", I need your opinions about song writing/ performance / mixing and sound.
I've done Guitar/Bass and programmed drums, another guy has done vocals for me, and a solo was done by a friend as a guest solo.
http://detoxicated.bandcamp.com/album/turbulence
Criticism is welcome, thanks.
P.S. incase you liked the music, here's the FB page : www.facebook.com/detoxicated.sy

If it's what you want to play, play it! But you asked for critique, so here goes...

Songwriting: hard to say. I've heard far worse.
Performance: you really seem to know what you are doing, awesome!
Mixing/sound: solo sounded weird but can't put my finger on why. Almost like it was not quite in tune?

Not my cup of tea, but good music. You should be proud of yourself and record more tunes.

Hi, upload on soundcloud, pls.

Snare far too high in the mix
also i"d prefer it if you played a bit faster
other than that quite like it, great start

Good production, songwriting is pretty weak though.