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Posted by on 17.05.2006 at 03:09
Well, we had it before, and we have it again. Post your gore metal lyrics here. I will post some when inspiration strikes, so please be patient that I didnt post them now. Im waiting for some of Angel Deformity's shit too. Grind on, bitches!



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ToughestMSmember

Posts: 3024

Age: 25
From: Vietnam

  14.02.2010 at 06:57
Written by Guest on 19.10.2006 at 19:58

Ok I dont really have any intresst in gore lyrics. But today I met 3 brats that didnt know how to behave, this is what I would do with them if it was legal:

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3 Pathetic boys in a cage
Time to make them suffer

First we let one of the fuckers out of the cage
We tie the sucker onto a chair
Lets play with needles shall we?
One in his left knee, deep inside ,TWITCH YOU WORM
One in his right knee, CRY YOU WEAKLING!
Five in his pathetic left hand, no ... lets go for 15
and lets not forget the eyes....
Oh the eyes....
I brought a drill for this joyful event
Drilling his eyes DRILLING HIS EYES
Die you pathetic fuck and rot forever in this chair,

Time for boy number two
This time I brought a nice axe
Chop chop your fucking fingers are now mine
Chop chop your ears are now on the floor
Drill the fucking hands DRILL THEM.
Huge holes in your palms ENJOY.
Lets not forget the salt, SALT IN THE WOUNDS.
Lets chop thoose hands of too
and lets use all the fucking salt I have
I will let you bleed to death with the salt as company fucker.....

Oh and the last boy
I brought a gun for this
BANG! YOUR BRAIN FITTS BETTER ON THE FLOOR THAN IN YOUR NONEXISTING HEAD!.
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Ok I know this is silly XD but im bored and I hate kids that dont know that they SHOULD NOT THROW CUCUMBERS AT PEOPLE.

Haha, I love this best
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Never Marry or forming relation with lion the LEO WOMEN. They all just want to control, tell you what to do for their sake and their ruler being for "cool" themself. They are BAD mom/wife/partner and will fuck up all people's life by their
Got Mayhem?

Posts: 767

Age: 20
From: USA

  11.03.2010 at 03:18
Wrote this for English class once. Went over pretty well if I remember correctly. "You're fucked up bro" is a positive comment right?

The Devouring Fear of Life

Neural deconstruction, mental termination
Consciousness slowly ripping
Behold my masterpiece; Hallucinogenic evisceration

To be awake is to be Alive
To be aware is to wish to die
Embrace your physical ulcerations
The universe is your Hearse

Scrambling to piece together cranial disarray
This heaving mass of anatomical pattern
Strives to abandon it's useless self

Madness envelopes this disemboweled mind
Frantically mangled and putrefied
Carving catacombs of nothingness
You become a memorial of slaughtered desires

Surgical precision matches barbaric battering
Reverting back to primal paths
Has not escaped the reality of death
A message to others:
We all follow the same decaying path
Violence is our most primal trait
Once we fall we do not rise again

Searching for meaning within pathetically human limits
You've abandoned the bovine human herd
As you fester your realize what you need to become
The carbonized caricature of what you could not achieve

The brutal truth batters an already diffused consciousness
Inter Mortis begins as you struggle to scream
Cyanosis paints a mural on your flesh
A garbled effigy surfaces as you become a pathological puzzle
A cold mannequin...

Comments would be appreciated. I actually like this piece alot.
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Don Martin
le fu-

Posts: 424

Age: 17
From: Belgium

  11.03.2010 at 22:25
Brain Drain

Hose to the head
Soon to be dead
Full sucking power
You react slower

(slow part) You can see...
Your own brain
Running through the hose...

Vomit in disgust
Still the hoses suck
I don't care
'cause I'm a sick fuck!

Well, at least it rhymes.

Oh, PS: I wrote this aged 12 or 13. (14 ain't much better, but still...)
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What a tackastrophe!
Perseverance
Account deleted
  14.08.2010 at 15:43
Written by Don Martin on 11.03.2010 at 22:25

Brain Drain

Hose to the head
Soon to be dead
Full sucking power
You react slower

(slow part) You can see...
Your own brain
Running through the hose...

Vomit in disgust
Still the hoses suck
I don't care
'cause I'm a sick fuck!

Well, at least it rhymes.

Oh, PS: I wrote this aged 12 or 13. (14 ain't much better, but still...)


I liked it.Shit with your permission I'd use it.
Don Martin
le fu-

Posts: 424

Age: 17
From: Belgium

  14.08.2010 at 22:37
Written by Guest on 14.08.2010 at 15:43

Written by Don Martin on 11.03.2010 at 22:25

Brain Drain

Hose to the head
Soon to be dead
Full sucking power
You react slower

(slow part) You can see...
Your own brain
Running through the hose...

Vomit in disgust
Still the hoses suck
I don't care
'cause I'm a sick fuck!

Well, at least it rhymes.

Oh, PS: I wrote this aged 12 or 13. (14 ain't much better, but still...)


I liked it.Shit with your permission I'd use it.

It's kinda Autopsy styled eh?
Hmm, I dunno. Thinking about starting my own band and modifying it a little bit, if you modify it a bit too, you sure can use it
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What a tackastrophe!
Perseverance
Account deleted
  15.08.2010 at 09:20
Written by Don Martin on 14.08.2010 at 22:37

Written by Guest on 14.08.2010 at 15:43

Written by Don Martin on 11.03.2010 at 22:25

Brain Drain

Hose to the head
Soon to be dead
Full sucking power
You react slower

(slow part) You can see...
Your own brain
Running through the hose...

Vomit in disgust
Still the hoses suck
I don't care
'cause I'm a sick fuck!

Well, at least it rhymes.

Oh, PS: I wrote this aged 12 or 13. (14 ain't much better, but still...)


I liked it.Shit with your permission I'd use it.

It's kinda Autopsy styled eh?
Hmm, I dunno. Thinking about starting my own band and modifying it a little bit, if you modify it a bit too, you sure can use it


Thanks! My modification would be to do the lyrics in a doom style.
Don Martin
le fu-

Posts: 424

Age: 17
From: Belgium

  15.08.2010 at 15:02
Written by Guest on 15.08.2010 at 09:20

Written by Don Martin on 14.08.2010 at 22:37

Written by Guest on 14.08.2010 at 15:43

Written by Don Martin on 11.03.2010 at 22:25

Brain Drain

Hose to the head
Soon to be dead
Full sucking power
You react slower

(slow part) You can see...
Your own brain
Running through the hose...

Vomit in disgust
Still the hoses suck
I don't care
'cause I'm a sick fuck!

Well, at least it rhymes.

Oh, PS: I wrote this aged 12 or 13. (14 ain't much better, but still...)


I liked it.Shit with your permission I'd use it.

It's kinda Autopsy styled eh?
Hmm, I dunno. Thinking about starting my own band and modifying it a little bit, if you modify it a bit too, you sure can use it


Thanks! My modification would be to do the lyrics in a doom style.

Do as you want, are you in a band btw?
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What a tackastrophe!
Perseverance
Account deleted
  15.08.2010 at 15:08
Quote:
Quote:

Do as you want, are you in a band btw?


Several, Perverse Imagery (Doomcore?) Sadistik Oranges (Comedic Death Metal) Cannot Eat a Canadians Soul While Ridding an Amtrak Across Russia (Metalcore)! None of these bands have any albums, mostly because there all one man projects and I'm very lazy. If you were any where near Satantonio Antarctica I'd ask if you would like to contribute. But since your in Belgian in SOL.
vezzy
il kil u gooby

Posts: 3466

Age: 15
From: Bulgaria

  19.08.2010 at 00:05
I've been writing crap like this for some time now. I make up bands to go with it.

Here's one I call "Skull Necklace":

Mauled with an axe
Skull cracked open, blood leaks out
Grab a saw, cut pieces of the bone
A skull necklace of my own

Dip it in blood
Send them to unholy cults
A small gift from the sick
A small gift of dominance

My own skull necklace [x2]
My own way to bring fear
To bring hate
To bring repulsion to the living

Just me and my skull necklace
Beads of human bone
String of decomposing skin
Yes, just me and my grim old skull necklace
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Written by Guest on 29.01.2011 at 02:14
Somehow I is get feeling that my grammars is sucked at the moment, it's late here. Let this be a homage to Bad English, who started this topic.
VloRD

Posts: 113
From: India

  22.06.2011 at 18:30
Written by Got Mayhem? on 11.03.2010 at 03:18

Wrote this for English class once. Went over pretty well if I remember correctly. "You're fucked up bro" is a positive comment right?

The Devouring Fear of Life

Neural deconstruction, mental termination
Consciousness slowly ripping
Behold my masterpiece; Hallucinogenic evisceration

To be awake is to be Alive
To be aware is to wish to die
Embrace your physical ulcerations
The universe is your Hearse

Scrambling to piece together cranial disarray
This heaving mass of anatomical pattern
Strives to abandon it's useless self

Madness envelopes this disemboweled mind
Frantically mangled and putrefied
Carving catacombs of nothingness
You become a memorial of slaughtered desires

Surgical precision matches barbaric battering
Reverting back to primal paths
Has not escaped the reality of death
A message to others:
We all follow the same decaying path
Violence is our most primal trait
Once we fall we do not rise again

Searching for meaning within pathetically human limits
You've abandoned the bovine human herd
As you fester your realize what you need to become
The carbonized caricature of what you could not achieve

The brutal truth batters an already diffused consciousness
Inter Mortis begins as you struggle to scream
Cyanosis paints a mural on your flesh
A garbled effigy surfaces as you become a pathological puzzle
A cold mannequin...

Comments would be appreciated. I actually like this piece alot.


wow! this is real good stuff, gore with some intelligence....thats hard to find
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BeastOfMetal456
Account deleted
  30.07.2011 at 03:58
I usually dislike gory lyrics, mainly because of Cannibal Corpse. However, I enjoy Autopsy and Necrophagist gore.
Vlazreus

Posts: 5
From: USA

  18.08.2011 at 06:01
I'm working on lyrics for a song called "Darkness I, In Entrails Cloaked"
Troy Killjoy
Pallbearer

Posts: 14797

Age: 21
From: Canada

  18.08.2011 at 06:07
Written by Vlazreus on 18.08.2011 at 06:01
I'm working on lyrics for a song called "Darkness I, In Entrails Cloaked"

Plan on sharing them once they're completed?

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