22:40 - Fritillaria does anybody agree ? I just would change the place of that comma between "Classic" and " Album" , ah, people do you read what I write ? anyway don't get me wrong I really appreciate all the time proofreaders like psyko spend for..
22:37 - E.Mols86 I'd remove both commas, but especially the last comma. Try talking with a pause like that... I mean, come on. So yeah, basically what ScreamingSteelUS says. D.T. Metal, funny you misspelled "extension", as you're American and all.