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Posted by Bas, 17.05.2006 - 14:24
and dont forget to comment those of the other people who post here please
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
25.10.2006 - 21:22
I am awaiting.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
31.10.2006 - 17:35
no,it's not alexander the great again i think something needs to be changed here,perhaps the chorus.what do you think?other than that i like how it turned out: The ideal Judgemental society Bereft of hipocrisy Not with us, Then against Cloning the grand ideal And those who can't allign Trampled by the conformism Toleration,acceptance,no sign Force feeding the truth With the invisible spoon Cloning worthless youth Free minds are stolen (spoken maybe,like the interlude to night crawler) I see the lessers taking the throne We're crawling before them in our own home And before they cut us to mincemeat To curse our birth we'll scream Can't fucking stand this shit Double standards,more paranoid everyday Falling in conformity's pit They follow the self indulging ways Cloning the grand ideal And those who can't allign Trampled by the conformism Toleration,acceptance,no sign There is no truth beyond you Fearing the unkown,the coup D'etat is drawing near The end of the ideal is here Cloning the grand ideal And those who can't allign Trampled by the conformism Toleration,acceptance,no sign Perverted by the ideal of old,mindless The masses can but stand in awe,speachless As the free minds seize the throne,righteous The ideal is destroyed in their madness,blindness For a new one is about to rise,devastating Brainwashing the stupid masses,enslaving The never ending cycle continues
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
31.10.2006 - 20:22
Ah, that's a shame. hipocrisy is spelled: hypocrisy I think the chorus is the best part of this lyric man! I also like this sentence: The masses can but stand in awe,speachless I really like it, I have a suggestion, though: Change: Can't fucking stand this shit Double standards,more paranoid everyday Falling in conformity's pit They follow the self indulging ways into: I cannot take another hit Double standards, the pigs preach lies Falling in conformity's pit They follow the self indulging ways (I would have actually changed the last sentence too into someting that rhymes with 'lies' such as for example 'weak tries', but this is going against the general rhyming you use, so I wont) For the rest I have no suggestions.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
01.11.2006 - 14:00
thanks a lot! but all the lyricists seem to have disappeared
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
01.11.2006 - 17:16
yeah, those lazy bastards are all gone. well, what's wrong with a dialogue. Please comment me on this one: Arrows of the sun Raging fire drops like rain Wrath from the exhalted one No strength to restrain This mandatory suicide 'tis madnes hunting you they fall first, the ones with pride flee from this world so cruel Conquer the forlorn No time for sympathy Death will have us torn Asunder in misery Arrows of the sun Raging fire drops like rain Wrath from the exhalted one No strength to sustain This mandatory suicide 'tis madnes hunting you they fall first, the ones with pride flee from this world so cruel Anonymous in the grave Your death was not enough The enemy has conquered us And they'll reign.. till another war It's something I wrote a few days ago. Tell me what you think of it. Does it suite a Thrash band?
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
01.11.2006 - 19:33
i don't seem to understand the meaning of the lyrics,but i think it'll do good with either a death or gothic band... Conquer the forlorn No time for sympathy Death will have us torn Asunder in misery this one is good,it flows quite well Arrows of the sun Raging fire drops like rain Wrath from the exhalted one No strength to restrain This mandatory suicide 'tis madnes hunting you they fall first, the ones with pride flee from this world so cruel again,this flows well,but i can't seem to understand the theme...the prechorus-chorus verses flow so good, that even speaking them out is like rapping Anonymous in the grave Your death was not enough The enemy has conquered us And they'll reign.. till another war this doesn't flow that good like the other stuff,but if it's an outro,it doesn't really have to rhyme or flow good
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
01.11.2006 - 22:18
OK, let me try to explain. It seems that most of my lyrics starts as an aggresive war-song, but usually I add an sort of sarcastic touch at the end (well, I try to) Arrows of the sun Raging fire drops like rain Wrath from the exhalted one No strength to restrain This mandatory suicide 'tis madnes hunting you they fall first, the ones with pride flee from this world so cruel These two parts are meant to illustrate a warfield, the insane chaos, fear and disillusions at a warfield. Raging fire, no strength to resist etc. are there to make you think about how life in war is like. Conquer the forlorn No time for sympathy Death will have us torn Asunder in misery There is not really a meaning in this part, at least not when I wrote it. Also tries to illustrate the chaos, no sympathy for the dead, misery and loniless. Anonymous in the grave Your death was not enough The enemy has conquered us And they'll reign.. till another war Like I said, this is supposed to be the sarcastic twist. Illustrates a victim of war, nameless in a mass-grave with the other thousands.. his death was not enough, as the enemy has taken control of his country/city/whatever. So his death was useless. The enemy conquered his people, and they will reign. Till they will also fall, in the next war. That last sentence should illustrate the endless cycle of war and peace, and should make the reader/listener think about how useless war is. That's what I write about. Hope it helped.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
02.11.2006 - 15:04
yeah it helped.but i can;t think of any more suggestions now.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
04.11.2006 - 11:15
I myself am really proud of what i did below and i think it's the best lyric i've written so far The werewolf Twelve times cursed And twelve times blessed Full moon beckons The longest seconds Eyes turning red Skin turning to fur The man inside is dead Midnight is here Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Cursed for lifetime to ever walk The fullmoon paths in search of blood Morning reveals, the sun ascends You wish never to see night again Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Eyes turning red Skin turning to fur The man inside is dead Midnight is here Many a man you ripped apart Cold blood runs through your heart The taste on your lips of a hundred men dead Can't stop the bullet from piercing your head Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Twelve times was cursed And twelve times was blessed The midnight madness raged in the land Werewolf's howl never to be heard again and it's alexander again!!! Alexander the great II-the zenit Defeating the persians He exposed the genius His eyes see the future Darius fled before him The persians defeated Slaughtered and mangled Darius the worthless Killed by his own men Killed by his own men... Egypt raised him high A pharaoh he stands The one foreign pharaoh The last of the pharaoh Marching through the desert Pushing his men to the limits Soldier's plagued by famine and thirst He calls upon them to march on "Fear is in your eyes And let it not blind you Would you wish you were dying in your beds Or living the true life and becoming gods? Follow me, and i will lead you to your destiny Mount Olympus awaits you all, my friends!"
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
04.11.2006 - 21:49
Well, let's see if I agree. The werewolf Twelve times cursed And twelve times blessed Full moon beckons The longest seconds Ok, not something special. I wonder why you used 'twelve' times though? Thirteen seems to be more a 'sinister' number, or does 'twelve' symbolize something I don't know? Eyes turning red Skin turning to fur The man inside is dead Midnight is here The man inside is dead. <- Good one. I'd turn 'Midnight is here' into something like: foul creature arises Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Hehe, nice. Cursed for lifetime to ever walk The fullmoon paths in search of blood Morning reveals, the sun ascends You wish never to see night again This one is nice too, especially the first three sentences. Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Eyes turning red Skin turning to fur The man inside is dead Midnight is here Many a man you ripped apart Cold blood runs through your heart The taste on your lips of a hundred men dead Can't stop the bullet from piercing your head Interesting course, the werewolve dies? That's a shame I had hoped he would live on. Everything you loved, forget it Everything you hated, destroy it The beast howls, insatiable thirst In a flash the bloodbath bursts Twelve times was cursed And twelve times was blessed The midnight madness raged in the land Werewolf's howl never to be heard again Yeah, this one was very good. It wasn't better then the first Alexander though, IMO. and it's alexander again!!! Hurray! Alexander the great II-the zenit Defeating the persians He exposed the genius His eyes see the future Darius fled before him This doesn't flaw right, IMO. Perhaps I need a good guitar rythm, but I can't find it, if you get what I mean. The persians defeated Slaughtered and mangled Darius the worthless Killed by his own men Killed by his own men... Oh yeah, the bastard fled. Darius was a coward. Egypt raised him high A pharaoh he stands The one foreign pharaoh The last of the pharaoh Was he really the last, I didn't know that? Good part, this one Marching through the desert Pushing his men to the limits Soldier's plagued by famine and thirst He calls upon them to march on I clearly see the movie in my mind again. That's a good thing. "Fear is in your eyes And let it not blind you Would you wish you were dying in your beds Or living the true life and becoming gods? Follow me, and i will lead you to your destiny Mount Olympus awaits you all, my friends!" Nice, very nice. One question though, is it really Mount Olympus? I mean, MO is from the Greek religion. Or am I wrong? I liked both! Keep on getting them coming, and I hope the others return.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
05.11.2006 - 14:17
he didn't get killed, he commited suicide(the wolf) and as far as i know alexander(in 328 bc or something) was greeted as a pharaoh in egypt and he basically was the only one to deserve the title and apart from the guys who reigned from 328 to 54 bc or something until QUEEN cleopatra-not pharaohess or something-was defeated they were only kings,not pharaohs(even the word pharaoh simbolizes a lot more than just king, similar to prince-emperor or something) and i never saw the whole movie though, but there is a poem written by a romanian guy telling about how his army marched through the desert and they had to drain basically every well they passed by, and he went to check on the guys getting the water, and one offers him a bucket full of it(who wouldn't ) but he refuses it, saying the soldiers need the water more than him and thus the mighty macedonian phalanx hail him and take an oath to forever follow him into glory and cheese!!!! that's what actually inspired me to do it and again about the werewolf- and the number twelve-think of this: twelve months, twelve bright hours, twelve dark hours, twelve major keys, twelve minor keys, it's the reason there are twelve stars on the EU flag even though there are 27 member states- it's basically the "perfect" number.i know i ripped off iron maiden with their "seven deadly sins, seven ways to win, seven paths to hell..." and as a matter of fact i really had that in mind, but since no-one ever used 12 as a symbol in their songs, why should i care? thanks a lot though!
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
05.11.2006 - 14:55
Ah, I see. That he commits suicide is not really clear to me, nor do I think it will be clear to others. Nice history lesson, thanks mate! Never knew that, about twelve. thanks again
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
06.11.2006 - 09:40
wohoot i just finished alexander the great Alexander the great III-the fall The soldiers followed him Their order was his whim Trampling all standing against His lust for glory can't be fenced He who untied the gordian knot Shall rule the lands from ocean to ocean Alexander cut the knot But he won't become the lord of Asia He won't rule the lands of Asia... (with a demonic "voodoo" drumbeat,like igor cavalera used to do) The ground is shaking Giant's awakening Hold your spears Conquer your fears The rajah defeated him Only one defeated him Trampled the world in vain With pierced arm, he lies in pain In Babylon he conceives A plan to seize the glory But fate has him deceived He'll pay for his folly For Arabia we'll head To conquer the desert To Arabia we'll head To seek out the treasures Omen of death at horizon stands Dead birds fall from the trees But none can stop his majestic plans Not even a deadly disease Useless is fame, fortune and glory He is paying for his folly Inconscious in his own bed Lying in immense pain Red and swollen is his head Alexander the great's his name Only once was he defeated Alexander the great's glory Brushed aside by a bird dead Thus he paid for his folly Centuries later worshipped still Genius commander, killed by fate Like a war god standing tall The statue of Alexander the great
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
06.11.2006 - 19:09
I have asked Bas2 to return to this thread, let's hope he listens to my call. Alexander the great III-the fall The soldiers followed him Their order was his whim Trampling all standing against His lust for glory can't be fenced Yeah, another Alexander. A shame he dies after this ones. He who untied the gordian knot Shall rule the lands from ocean to ocean Alexander cut the knot But he won't become the lord of Asia He won't rule the lands of Asia... Isn't it 'guardian' instead of 'gordian'? I hope you do those last two sentences in a dramatic voice, getting softer into a whisper.. seems fitting for me. (with a demonic "voodoo" drumbeat,like igor cavalera used to do) The ground is shaking Giant's awakening Hold your spears Conquer your fears Nice part. Short but strong. The rajah defeated him Only one defeated him Trampled the world in vain With pierced arm, he lies in pain What is 'rajah'? He died of a fatal wound, I know that, but was that caused by 'rajah'. Was that not 'maharajah'? In Babylon he conceives A plan to seize the glory But fate has him deceived He'll pay for his folly For Arabia we'll head To conquer the desert To Arabia we'll head To seek out the treasures Omen of death at horizon stands Dead birds fall from the trees But none can stop his majestic plans Not even a deadly disease Ah, this was a majestic part. He spoke to his army, white as the dead, to keep fighting, didn't he? Very good part of the movies, nice way of translating that into lyrics! Useless is fame, fortune and glory He is paying for his folly Inconscious in his own bed Lying in immense pain Red and swollen is his head Alexander the great's his name A tragic moment. Only once was he defeated Alexander the great's glory Brushed aside by a bird dead Thus he paid for his folly ONce was enough. I don't get the reference with the dead bird, though. Centuries later worshipped still Genius commander, killed by fate Like a war god standing tall The statue of Alexander the great Hell yeah, Alexander the great!! Very good part, I really liked this trilogy. I really hope you can once put this to music. Good luck with that!
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
06.11.2006 - 21:33
well..it seems you don't know quite much about alexander's life or you weren't paying attention to the movie remember the evil-looking indian in the movie,the guy on the elephant? that's the rajah, the guy who threw the spear. He didn't die from the arrow the rajah's soldier shot at him, he recovered from the injury and then got killed by west nile fever which he caught from dead birds when he prepared to get his act together and conquer arabia (dunno why) and if you didn't notice, the ground is shaking part is the part where the elephants start to charge from the jungle and he wants them to keep the lines and stuff the rajah=basically indian king, a thing which, porus, the guy who fought him at the river, was(i hope) and hey,thanks a whole fucking lot!!
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
07.11.2006 - 09:45
Well, it was a long time ago and I watchd it only once. You can't blame me. but thanks, again.
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09.11.2006 - 17:16 Desolate Grace
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Ok, everyone's lyrics ROCK here. Uhmm. Well, here is a poem (we will change it to a song) Tori just wrote like yesterday (no music to it yet!) It's not exactly ready, but Tori wrote it cause she was bored in this stupid keyboarding class. "Forever Waiting" As we take in the dark To what we are called But I know, we've been here for so long Now I cover my sins Send them back to the skies of time Here I'll pierce the flesh Unwashed wound of ebony Leave me lifeless, make me broken, my beloved I'm waiting astray with what now is desolate Falling into this moonlight as darkness whispers my name In the night withholding the tears I long to cry The leading perfect life forever gone with my strife While I wait in my innocence I'll forever die with this everlasting life Blended with the shadows upon my forest bed Waiting for the rising why the world is immorally dead This night I can pray for this life of shame I'll wait for your hand to take me away
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
15.11.2006 - 17:58
That's not too much of a comment. As we take in the dark To what we are called But I know, we've been here for so long I will try to divide this into parts to keep the commenting easier, but i might not always divide where you thought of dividing it yourself, not my fault though. Now I cover my sins Send them back to the skies of time Here I'll pierce the flesh Unwashed wound of ebony Leave me lifeless, make me broken, my beloved I don't see how this flows, what's the rythm? That's always hard without sound, but with some lyrics i can think of something, with this one I can't, sorry. Wounds of ebony? What's that? I'm waiting astray with what now is desolate Falling into this moonlight as darkness whispers my name I like the words you use, but I don't really see what they mean. In the night withholding the tears I long to cry The leading perfect life forever gone with my strife This part is good, especially the second sentence While I wait in my innocence I'll forever die with this everlasting life Blended with the shadows upon my forest bed the second sentence is quite bad, imo. doesn't really make sense. i think i see what you try to say, but try saying it differently Waiting for the rising why the world is immorally dead This night I can pray for this life of shame I'll wait for your hand to take me away Last two sentences are good, really.
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
15.11.2006 - 18:04
Now, too keep things seperate I'll post my new one here. This one was thrown onto paper in about 5 minutes, so don't expect too much of it. Here it is: Reverie Of The Forgotten My path for a moment sealed in snow trampled on the frozen ground. Without the will to stop the flow forever we will haunt. The endless planes of our memory tricked, deceived and battered. Peaceful our death will never be forever we are shattered. We transgress the holy border of those alive and those in death. We are the ones who create disorder forever dwells our aftermath.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
15.11.2006 - 18:22
hey, it flows, but i just can't grasp the meaning of it. sounds opeth-ish with black metal vocals My path for a moment sealed in snow trampled on the frozen ground. Without the will to stop the flow forever we will haunt. it flows well, but as usual the meaning of your lyrics is a bit vague The endless planes of our memory tricked, deceived and battered. Peaceful our death will never be forever we are shattered. this could use as a chorus, since it is catchy, and if you wanna rip trivium off you could change the title from "reveries of the forgotten" to "reveries of the forgotten(forever we are shattered)" We transgress the holy border of those alive and those in death. We are the ones who create disorder forever dwells our aftermath. this one is the vaguest, but it suits an outro, from my point of view. but i would change the last sentence, since it doesn't feel quite right. i'd change it into "forever lives our aftermath"
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
17.11.2006 - 19:46
Thanks cursed. Well, my lyrics are always vague as I try to keep them vague. And I don't write down a story such as you, I just throw a couple of (random) good sounding words on paper. Damn, is that a Trivium song? I seriously consider changing it then, cause the title is not important anyway. And about your suggestion, thanks, you might be right, but I love the word 'dwells' so I just wanted to use it there.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
20.11.2006 - 17:09
how about this? obviously a song about ww1/ww2 Trench Hero/The Cross You Wear Waist up in mud He holds his gun When will it end When has this begun? Screams of pain Familiar voices Dying in vain Don't have many choices Trench heroes Clinging to their gun Trench heroes Deaf, blind and dumb Trench heroes Wars can't be won They're trench heroes Raining death from a grey sky A million corpses on the field lie Shells raining from way up high Pouring down on the P.B.I. Trench heroes Clinging to their gun Trench heroes Deaf, blind and dumb Trench heroes Wars can't be won They're trench heroes (the cross you wear) The cross on your chest you wear A symbol of courage, or bloodlust is it? The death of a hundred souls you bear Still you boast about the men you killed Sixty years have passed since And have you repented once? Heard the unarmed soldier's death cry The cross you wear is just a lie The cross you wear's The stone you bear When you hear the victory bell You're already on the path to hell Defiled the book, Defiled all human The lives you took Forever will haunt Read the ten holy rules How many have you broken? Now you cannot play the fool For your sins can't be forgiven The cross you wear's The stone you bear When you hear the victory bell You're already on the path to hell 2x You forgot your god Your god's forgotten you You spat on your god Satan's waiting for you 2x Running out of time Hear the victory bell But victory is not it's chime For a soul is sent to hell
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
20.11.2006 - 18:00
By the way, I overread it when I read your comment the verse time, but you said it was 'Opeth-ish'. And that's a fuckign big compliment for me. Trench Hero/ Good title, nice word-use and sarcastic. I love that. Waist up in mud He holds his gun When will it end When has this begun? Screams of pain Familiar voices Dying in vain Don't have many choices These are good parts. I have never been at a warfield or in a war, but it must be something like this. Trench heroes Clinging to their gun Trench heroes Deaf, blind and dumb Trench heroes Wars can't be won They're trench heroes This is a real nice part. Wars can't be won. Wow. That's a very good sentence, no kidding. Good! Raining death from a grey sky A million corpses on the field lie Shells raining from way up high Pouring down on the P.B.I. A good part, Slayer influenced? Trench heroes Clinging to their gun Trench heroes Deaf, blind and dumb Trench heroes Wars can't be won They're trench heroes The cross you wear I don't get the title (yet) The cross on your chest you wear A symbol of courage, or bloodlust is it? The death of a hundred souls you bear Still you boast about the men you killed The last two sentences are very good, unfortunatly doesn't rhyme. Sixty years have passed since And have you repented once? Heard the unarmed soldier's death cry The cross you wear is just a lie Nice nice. Can't say more, just nice. The cross you wear's The stone you bear When you hear the victory bell You're already on the path to hell Defiled the book, Defiled all human The lives you took Forever will haunt Read the ten holy rules How many have you broken? Now you cannot play the fool For your sins can't be forgiven Good part, will he regret? The cross you wear's The stone you bear When you hear the victory bell You're already on the path to hell You forgot your god Your god's forgotten you You spat on your god Satan's waiting for you Running out of time Hear the victory bell But victory is not it's chime For a soul is sent to hell Hehe nice, especially the last part. I like it man, but I liked the 'Trench Heroes' better.
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Valentin B Iconoclast |
20.11.2006 - 18:50
well, basically it's a song divided in 2 parts: trench hero and the cross you wear(military honour) and...thanks! i had a little bit of stormrider-period iced earth in mind when i wrote them, not slayer
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
20.11.2006 - 19:20
Oh well. It also reminded me of Iron Mainden too. Don't know 'Stormrider' though. But especially 'Raining death' maybe me think of Slayer.
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Sunioj |
22.11.2006 - 16:08
Untitled, maybe someone else can suggest one Black enfumes, Construct the patterns I reveal, With thoughts unbalanced, I shall steal my true talents. Things only crime can heal, Animosity and discomfort, And enchanting spirits. I wait, in the decay of Gods presence. And salvation to feel. Chants of the unheard, And spewing the ash of the undead, I watch with conviction and glory, The river of styx unleashed, Your holy city in flames, I am ever so pleased. Shall elohim cease, I will rest, In the altars of your gods empire, Deep defile and hate, I Preserve my destiny. It contains your fate.
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
23.11.2006 - 22:09
Black enfumes, Construct the patterns I reveal, With thoughts unbalanced, I shall steal my true talents. I don't get it. Mysterious it is. But I like the way it sounds. Things only crime can heal, Animosity and discomfort, And enchanting spirits. I wait, in the decay of Gods presence. And salvation to feel. You know, again I say I don't get the meaning behind, but sentences like 'animosity and discomfort.. and enchanting spirits' are just.. good. I don't know what it makes them good, but I just like it. Chants of the unheard, And spewing the ash of the undead, I watch with conviction and glory, The river of styx unleashed, Your holy city in flames, I am ever so pleased. Shall elohim cease, I will rest, In the altars of your gods empire, Deep defile and hate, I Preserve my destiny. It contains your fate. I give up commenting. I repeat, I don't understand a flying f**k of it, but that makes it mysterious. A very good one, really.
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Sunioj |
25.11.2006 - 17:10
( religion that is merely a deceiful pattern, only darkness to bring out true light, religion that is merely a deceiful pattern ) Black enfumes, Construct the patterns I reveal, With thoughts unbalanced, I shall steal my true talents. ( while in the haze of the moment, I will take what shouldve been mine, freedom to live and chose for myself rather than the facade of freedom by religion) Things only crime can heal, Animosity and discomfort, And enchanting spirits. I wait, in the decay of Gods presence. And salvation to feel. ( disgust and hatred doesnt just go away, it builds up towards extremism, enchanting spirits, are the attraction to evil spirits to obey. And wait for the face of religion to fall while witnessing their holy structurs in fire) Chants of the unheard, And spewing the ash of the undead, I watch with conviction and glory, The river of styx unleashed, Your holy city in flames, I am ever so pleased. (the enchanting spirits are being heard by the ignorant while the dead and perssecuted spew pestilence, the river of styx ( river in the pentagram ) is released in retalation for the holy facade that I witness, and it pleases me. Shall elohim cease, I will rest, In the altars of your gods empire, Deep defile and hate, I Preserve my destiny. It contains your fate. ( When "god" dies, I wll be able to rest, in the ashes of all illusions, and the buildup towards hate is proactive therefore if you are involved in it you might suffer too. )
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Lucas Mr. Noise Elite |
26.11.2006 - 11:51
Wow. So it really is mroe than just some 'mystique' lyrics. Great job man!
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