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'grats on your first review. Shame my couple of punctuation corrections didn't make it though =P
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Alex F
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Written by [user id=4365] on 04.12.2014 at 00:38
'grats on your first review. Shame my couple of punctuation corrections didn't make it though =P
Wait... what punctuation corrections? I thought I had fixed them.
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Written by Alex F on 04.12.2014 at 00:46
Wait... what punctuation corrections? I thought I had fixed them.
vocalists should be vocalist's, and its' should just be its. Nothing major.
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Written by [user id=4365] on 04.12.2014 at 00:47
vocalists should be vocalist's, and its' should just be its. Nothing major.
I am a failure
Sorry, thought I had fixed them.
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Ilham Giant robot
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04.12.2014 - 00:50Rating: 7
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Yeah, I say cute start, really.
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Written by Alex F on 04.12.2014 at 00:49
I am a failure
Sorry, thought I had fixed them.
Lel, you should read through my reviews and see the masses of structural and grammatical errors there are.
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Written by [user id=4365] on 04.12.2014 at 00:51
Lel, you should read through my reviews and see the masses of structural and grammatical errors there are.
OK! I'll find them all and endlessly berate you for them
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Written by Alex F on 04.12.2014 at 00:52
OK! I'll find them all and endlessly berate you for them
Especially look out for the sentences that never fucking end, because that's how I used to write apparently, because I did, and stuff.
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Auntie Sahar Drone Empress
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That's some pretty damn good work for popping your reviewing cherry man, or at least much better than my first few were
This sounds like it's pretty impressive, and the fact that you describe it with such praise when it's still only a demo makes me want to check it out even more. Maybe I'm simplifying it, but this sounds something like Tyranny + Hexis from the way you paint it out, which definitely makes my mouth water. You'll be getting my opinion on it soon.
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I am the Magician and the Exorcist. I am the axle of the wheel, and the cube in the circle. “Come unto me” is a foolish word: for it is I that go.
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Written by Auntie Sahar on 04.12.2014 at 01:04
That's some pretty damn good work for popping your reviewing cherry man, or at least much better than my first few were
This sounds like it's pretty impressive, and the fact that you describe it with such praise when it's still only a demo makes me want to check it out even more. Maybe I'm simplifying it, but this sounds something like Tyranny + Hexis from the way you paint it out, which definitely makes my mouth water. You'll be getting me opinion on it soon.
I look forward to your thoughts! It's really got a lot of stylistic elements thrown in it, but I can definitely see the "Tyranny + Hexis" comparison. Also thanks! Hopefully I'll become a review-whore from here on out
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04.12.2014 - 02:40Rating: 8
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Congs on your first review.
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Auntie Sahar Drone Empress
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Ok, checking it now and this is pretty sick. I think the biggest selling point for me is that the vocals are reminding me a lot of Alan Dubin from Khanate, in the sense that they're harsh, but you can still fairly often make out what's being said without needing lyrics right in front of you. That's a rare delivery to come by, and I like it a lot. Musically it strikes a really good balance between its elements, thundering, almost drony doom one second, some BM style riffing the next, and I can hear that punk texture you mentioned subtly hear and there too. Great find man.
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Ilham Giant robot
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04.12.2014 - 15:52Rating: 7
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Yeah not contradicting you on the styles you heard, but I expected more of those touches. This remains principally blackened doom in my opinion. Great demo indeed, just realised I forgot to cast a vote.
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Written by Ilham on 04.12.2014 at 15:52
Yeah not contradicting you on the styles you heard, but I expected more of those touches. This remains principally blackened doom in my opinion. Great demo indeed, just realised I forgot to cast a vote.
I think I may have overstated them, so I am going to work on genre classification in future reviews. Those punk/hardcore/crust elements really only peak through at specific moments, and mostly just influence minor stylistic choices.
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04.12.2014 - 16:00Rating: 7
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Written by Alex F on 04.12.2014 at 15:55
I think I may have overstated them, so I am going to work on genre classification in future reviews. Those punk/hardcore/crust elements really only peak through at specific moments, and mostly just influence minor stylistic choices.
Nah don't, I think it's important to mention them even if they're minor, gives you a magnified feel of the album not a truncated simple two word statement. I bitched too fast, I should have nuanced my post. That's what makes it interesting, when the little outside influences suddenly pop out and you get the "oh that's what he was talking about" thing and you virtually fist-bump with the reviewer.
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Written by Ilham on 04.12.2014 at 16:00
Nah don't, I think it's important to mention them even if they're minor, gives you a magnified feel of the album not a truncated simple two word statement. I bitched too fast, I should have nuanced my post. That's what makes it interesting, when the little outside influences suddenly pop out and you get the "oh that's what he was talking about" thing and you virtually fist-bump with the reviewer.
Haha ok I see where you're coming from now. Thanks for the reflection though! It's my first review so I'm just trying to get all of the feedback possible.
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04.12.2014 - 17:12Rating: 7
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Written by Alex F on 04.12.2014 at 16:05
Haha ok I see where you're coming from now. Thanks for the reflection though! It's my first review so I'm just trying to get all of the feedback possible.
Don't take my words as gospel though. I don't have more than 40 reviews in my suitcase.
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