@GamlaSonn: very nice. I love it.

Written by GamlaSonn on 13.12.2009 at 04:15

I recently started to write some lyrics, some are humoristic and some are serious, this one is mostly for fun and hawt lovin'

LOL these were awesome. you should make it into a nwobhm or 70s rock song something like Bad Company - Feel Like Makin' Love or Diamond Head - Sucking My Love. very sleazy and shit like that.

Victory Song

Death came by spear and blade
Sprawled across the fields they lay

And their blood soaks into the ground
Those who are left will bury the slain
All men live or dead
Each must make his way home

Dedicate the victory won
To the widows and fatherless sons

Banners wave
Emblems fade
Children sing a song of honor and tears

Graves and shadow feed our regret
Can a man heal and still not forget?

Banners wave
Emblems fade
Children sing a song of honor

And their blood soaks into the ground
Those who are left will bury the slain
All men live or dead
Each must make his way home

Banners wave
Emblems fade
Children sing a song of honor and tears

Shit i wish i had my black book with me.... i'll post when i get home!!!!

Lyrics for two punk songs I wrote today

Forest From The Trees

They continue to sit huddled together
The hours are passing by
Wanting someone from above to take them now
Some force to cure them from the skies

The large double doors bust open again
Someone else at a slightly greater risk
A look of frustration falls over their face
Because of the lack of people to assist

So continue to cut it at the knees
And gash from it at every angle
You can't see the forest from the trees
And you continue to strangle

All time has completely slowed down
And I know everyone's life story
Their jaded attitudes cut really deep
Their faces show the ware and the tear

The lies that are fed to us all
To keep us always on the parade
And tote us all around like freaks
Because of the bed they have made

So continue to cut it at the knees
And gash from it at every angle
You can't see the forest from the trees
And you continue to strangle

Try To Smile

Please excuse the verbal diarrhea
That continues to flow from my lips
It's not my fault that the world is like it is
Wish I could live with you under that rock

Please excuse the depressing people
That I hang around with everyday
It's not my fault that they are so paranoid
Maybe it is the drugs that we all take

So keep living in denial
Hold back your tears and try to smile
Everything will turn to shit in a little while
Just hold back your tears and try to smile

Don't pass judgment on something you aren't sure of
And please stop making all those fabrications
You have lied to me for way too long
How am I supposed to trust a wolf in sheep's clothing?

My phone is still on even though I turned it off
They're watching me from space, you know
Silently judging while you still do the same
You chastise but at the same time you still complain

So keep living in denial
Hold back your tears and try to smile
Everything will turn to shit in a little while
Just hold back your tears and try to smile

So keep living in denial
Hold back your tears and try to smile
Everything will turn to shit in a little while
Just hold back your tears and try to smile

Here are two more short little punk songs I wrote:

Double Shot

A double shot of sugar and I'm flying
Flying high
Too much cream and you are bloated
Stomach hurts and I have to cry

A cup of caffeine to get me through my day
I crash at the office and I pray to the coffee Gods

A double shot is all that I got
In this messed up zoo
I just try to do what the others do

A caffeine love affair
If you tell me you don't care
I'll take this fucking sludge and burn your face

It is double glazed
And less than a dollar so I saved some money
For another double shot of pure ecstasy

Talking like a lunatic
When I talk I spit
I spit some of my creamy goodness at you

A double shot is all that I got
In this messed up zoo
I just try to do what the others do

A caffeine love affair
If you tell me you don't care
I'll take this fucking sludge and burn your face

The Club

I want to get your ass on the floor
Move like all those jaded people
Do the dance that everyone else is doing

And we'll do it right to the beat
Moving like zombies all the time
Thinking like a machine while we grind

Let's do the 2-step
Let's do the hop
Let's bounce around to the music
Until everyone else stops

Let's do the mamba
Let's do the twist
We'll bump and grind all night
And drink until we're sick

I want to see the junk in your trunk
Moving this way and that way
In those pants that I always thought were way too tight

Too much vigor
From the vodka and the energy drink
That plays with your heart like a mandolin

Let's do the 2-step
Let's do the hop
Let's bounce around to the music
Until everyone else stops

Let's do the mamba
Let's do the twist
We'll bump and grind all night
And drink until we're sick

Hi , I don't write lyric usually , my lyric is so short but i wanna know what's your idea , read and modify my lyric thanks




"Darkness Forever"

You're still furthering
How come ?
You're still suffering
Wherefore ?
You're still militating
For what ?
You're still waiting
For who ?

At last
The darkness will surround you
You'll spent from militate
Embrace your loneliness
It will remain whit you
Forever

Now open your eyes again
And you'll see it's passed too

Written by akvan on 02.02.2011 at 18:15

Hi , I don't write lyric usually , my lyric is so short but i wanna know what's your idea , read and modify my lyric thanks

It's so simple,I think. but for starting, it would be nice.

Written by Gurth Bennas on 06.02.2011 at 14:26

Written by akvan on 02.02.2011 at 18:15

Hi , I don't write lyric usually , my lyric is so short but i wanna know what's your idea , read and modify my lyric thanks

It's so simple,I think. but for starting, it would be nice.

It's in prog,death,depressing theme and i think by a good growl can be good

Labyrinth, Copyright Sonorous Odium, 2011

The nascent glow of dusk
Ascends into your ever waiting eyes
Twin reflections of quintessence
Ever alluring purity of the arcane

Simply a bleak and soulless
Messenger of demons
Flesh bound affinity and weakened psyche
Spare no hate stripping your facade

Chaos------------

The overpowering evil
Wrapped so warm around me
Drowns my conscience
As I beg for more

Gasping for air
Floundering in sin
Constricted by the most sinister
Divinity of a wretched goddess

Enraptured in the crushing failure
My hand gropes for your throat
You will know my misery
This perfect flesh you wear will be my sacrifice

To the lords below

The sunlight-----------------shall never breach our labyrinth of despair
The moonlight------------------------shall be our silent witness, as your
Final screams hang forever upon
The midnight air.


We are a melodic death metal band with a blackened, doomy edge (not the gay kind of melodic death)...so perhaps that could give some insight as to how this would sound. Thoughts?

This is the refrain of my "punk" bands song, which is a "tribute" to all the emo :

Scream Out:
suffocating
Under words of sorrow
Sorrow
Cut your wrists
make you bleed
let your blood run down down down

Shout loud:
I'm suicidal
I want to die
die
Misery
I Want to suffer
"go to your cave and cut cut cut!"

deep stuff?

The title is "Lowly"

I take my time
I hear her voice
Solemnly, I gaze upward
My eyes turn to blood

Black rings envelop
Sinking into the socket
Bleeding from every corner
Vibrations (equate to dissonance)

I fall, I break, and I breathe

Dead eyes are what I see
Black and lowly

Oh, where these eyes have been
Staring back, within
Please, erase my skin
And reveal my sin

What is and what shall never be
Torments me

My love, I cannot hide

Viking metal lyrics I wrote a few months ago. Please give me some feedback!


The Raven's Prophecy

Once more he speaks to me
Appeared in my dreams
Told my of times to come, of the legacies undone

Our time shall soon be over
Nothing will be remained
Our swords shall shatter, our blood will flow

Breaking the bonds of time
Destroy all sign of life
Silence surround all of our hearts
Ravens light shall shine

I now lay on the bloodstained ground
Close my eyes now that I have found
Eternal rest, my end is nigh
Now will I rise to the halls up high

I saw the truth
I told my tale
I'm breaking free
To no avail
I stand my ground
Until I die
Will speak no more
My end is nigh

I feel my spirit leaving
But life is endless
Thunder in my eyes, power in my heart
This is not an end, this is a start

I shall enter the legions of dead
And wait my time
I shall look down upon the perishing world
And grasp my sword in my hand

Now that the sky's on firer raging blind
The devastated souls shall once more fight
I take my sword and lead their way
And no-one shall stand in my way

I now lay on the bloodstained ground
Close my eyes now that I have found
Eternal rest, my end is nigh
Now that I rise to the halls up high

The darkness sets in
My mind goes blank
Hear me father, I am on my way
Ravens light shall shine!!

Child Of Stars

These walls used to mean a place where he could hide
Now they seem to exist only to keep him inside
All the doors are locked and the keys are not here
Every look outside brings back the same old fear

He feels so out of place, dislocated in time
He's the last of the race that left him behind
He cannot recall those who witnessed his birth
They forgot to bring him to their brave new Earth

He knows the shadows, but cannot connect
The answer is wrong, the question incorrect
Things he cannot control he begins to hate
But he knows: man's nature will become his fate

He feels so out of place...

I just went through some old folders on my computer and I ran into some lyrics the bassist in a band I played in wrote, supposedly to sound mystic and shit. Bad English / K7 deserves a PhD compared to this

the land of sand

from ancient time
laidy morgan and the gods

refect in the cobras eye

handel the trought
handel the lies
hadeled venom
trought olld times
reflected in the cobras eyessss

sick vengeants if u must
but make them
lose what you had lost

in to the cobras eye

My favorite thing I've written lately: (I wrote it, it belongs to me, don't steal it)
It will be a thrash song, à la Megadeth's Lucretia.

in the witching hour all hearts will race
sky high above natural human pace
there's an evil feeling in the air
that's tangible yet barely there
it holds an allure a magnetism
to those looking for danger an occult religion
dreams and demons laugh and dance
while flora puts fauna in a trance

whirlpools take to inhabiting air
some will stumble others stare
paintings take on more dimensions
breaking human comprehension
intensity hits a fever pitch
when eyes are captivated by the beautiful witch
the breeze electrocutes the air
cajoling you to take it's dare

the scene feels somewhat yet foretold
night blooming petals eerily unfold
against a dreadful trepidation
risk joining the evanescent congregation
the current drags wind ravages
yet nothing harms the celestial savages
there is no relief but yielding to the power
'til the dawn arrives melting the witching hour

Written by Guest on 08.11.2012 at 00:19

My favorite thing I've written lately: (I wrote it, it belongs to me, don't steal it)
It will be a thrash song, à la Megadeth's Lucretia.

in the witching hour all hearts will race
sky high above natural human pace
there's an evil feeling in the air
that's tangible yet barely there
it holds an allure a magnetism
to those looking for danger an occult religion
dreams and demons laugh and dance
while flora puts fauna in a trance

whirlpools take to inhabiting air
some will stumble others stare
paintings take on more dimensions
breaking human comprehension
intensity hits a fever pitch
when eyes are captivated by the beautiful witch
the breeze electrocutes the air
cajoling you to take it's dare

the scene feels somewhat yet foretold
night blooming petals eerily unfold
against a dreadful trepidation
risk joining the evanescent congregation
the current drags wind ravages
yet nothing harms the celestial savages
there is no relief but yielding to the power
'til the dawn arrives melting the witching hour

Now this was interesting and captivating, fantastic rhyming and great imagery. I liked it alot

Written by Eccer on 09.11.2012 at 02:55

Now this was interesting and captivating, fantastic rhyming and great imagery. I liked it alot

Thanks, I really appreciate that.

This is a very experimental piece, hope you like it Comment's are appreciated

Can you read?

A

Telescopic clouded scenery
Resting, invoked by
Unearthly material colors, blurry
Tracks in muddy patterns, a
Hologram for reflection

Unleash your masquerade
Nothing to hide behind
Folded hands, only
Ordeals to create
Look at the now and
Derive from perfection
Seek and find, what lingers deep inside

An abrupt occurrence of verbs, enigmatic
Senses revoked, the scope calculates

Eternal word plays
Dense is a mind
Elastic strings, binding the whole
Nether forms a chord

Eerie thoughts
Corresponding letter traps
Hordes of codes
Oracle chanting
Eclectic ways, dancing in cryptic mass
Steadfast, riding onward to paradise

I wrote this to a girl that i thought i love cause she thoughts she loves me ,for opeth's ending credits but dont used.

i thought i found my love
but i cant open my heart
this beauty comes in to my mind
i dont want to lose my sight

this is a little version of that , if you like and want i can write whole .

Is nobody here worried about people reading this thread, stealing your lyrics, and then passing them off as their own work? Unless you have copyrighted your lyrics, you have no way of preventing this from happening...

I wrote a couple of crappy songs when I was in my teens, but aside from them, I haven't written any more full sets of lyrics. I have a lot of ideas, but getting them down "on paper" in a way that satisifies me, is something I find difficult to do. I have got some lyrics down though for some potential songs, two of which are entitled "The Shredder", and "Death Warmed Up"... lol

Written by Angelic Storm on 09.02.2013 at 09:58

Is nobody here worried about people reading this thread, stealing your lyrics, and then passing them off as their own work? Unless you have copyrighted your lyrics, you have no way of preventing this from happening...

I wrote a couple of crappy songs when I was in my teens, but aside from them, I haven't written any more full sets of lyrics. I have a lot of ideas, but getting them down "on paper" in a way that satisifies me, is something I find difficult to do. I have got some lyrics down though for some potential songs, two of which are entitled "The Shredder", and "Death Warmed Up"... lol

I actually always wondered about this on any forum, regarding poetry, lyrics, riffs or anything. Call me paranoid, but that's one reason I don't post my stuff (anymore) . I've written tons of lyrics/poetry but I'm not much a person to fit it into a song, I always feel like its too forced.

Written by Sunioj on 11.02.2013 at 15:41
I actually always wondered about this on any forum, regarding poetry, lyrics, riffs or anything. Call me paranoid, but that's one reason I don't post my stuff (anymore) . I've written tons of lyrics/poetry but I'm not much a person to fit it into a song, I always feel like its too forced.

Yep, that's exactly why I'm very reluctant to post anything like that on here... Of course, I dunno if my writings are good enough for anyone to want to steal them, but I think it's best not to risk it just in case.

I haven't written much, and most of what I have written hasn't been specifically for song lyrics. But lately I have started thinking more about inserting some of those ideas into songs. lol

Written by Angelic Storm on 11.02.2013 at 17:52

Written by Sunioj on 11.02.2013 at 15:41
I actually always wondered about this on any forum, regarding poetry, lyrics, riffs or anything. Call me paranoid, but that's one reason I don't post my stuff (anymore) . I've written tons of lyrics/poetry but I'm not much a person to fit it into a song, I always feel like its too forced.

Yep, that's exactly why I'm very reluctant to post anything like that on here... Of course, I dunno if my writings are good enough for anyone to want to steal them, but I think it's best not to risk it just in case.

I haven't written much, and most of what I have written hasn't been specifically for song lyrics. But lately I have started thinking more about inserting some of those ideas into songs. lol

well for me it would be more like "my god, this guy is nuts! who thinks of this sick shit??" so I guess me being mental would protect me in a way :p but just to be sure!!